My improved story 2







When I opened the old cracked door of Room 14 I found myself in a horror show. Rats roamed the class like an Egyptian Emperor ''Duck!'' screamed Jensen to Jon ,suddenly Jon had a dramatic fall as he hit the hollow floor. 
Maybe if I close my eyes for a minute the class might calm down................... (No difference) The sun was  beaming through the window like a flamethrower. the teachers are slacking off as if today was Christmas, this is not how I imagined Christmas. The window has scratch marks made into the sentence less work more fun. Without warning a tickling feeling shot up my back I screamed to Anna ''Get it off Anna, oh please get it off!'' she yanked the poor critter right off my back and I let out a sigh of relief  ''Whew'' just then the door slams open ''WHAT IS GOING ON HERE!'' scorched Mr Skits ''oh oh.''